A thought experiment is only of use to convey the logical implications and structure of a model. A thought experiment tells you what the model says should happen, it does not tell you what the universe says happens. If a model is inconsistent then a thought experiment might be used to demonstrate as much. If you can't find a logical inconsistency then its not right as the thing which matters is whether the model and universe agree.
If a model is mathematically/logically consistent then a thought experiment alone won't be able to falsify it. As such you must include a comparison to experiments if you're going down the route of thought experiments, demonstrating the universe is not as the model's prediction in the thought experiment. You haven't done this. Further more SR and GR are mathematically sound. This is easily seen in SR as its the application of a well known and understood mathematical structure to space-time. In GR even black hole singularities are mathematically sound, though the specifics are much much more advanced than most other things in GR. Thus we need to include an experimental comparison somehow, but all possible ways of testing GR within the capability of an individual have been done, GR passed. Thus a paper written by someone outside a research group will not include new experimental data.
So we're left with new models. A new model would have to be demonstrated to work for all known experiments, at the very least. No crank I've ever come across has demonstrated they are aware of the majority of phenomena their 'model' must work for, never mind all of them better than GR. You included.
As Guest says, your paraphrasing is insufficient. You've previously paraphrased me incorrect to my face so lord knows what you're like when paraphrasing people not in the discussion.
Typical, models are not logically consistent, theories are.
In logic, a consistent theory is one that does not contain a contradiction[1]. The lack of contradiction can be defined in either semantic or syntactic terms. The semantic definition states that a theory is consistent if it has a model; this is the sense used in traditional Aristotelian logic, although in contemporary mathematical logic the term satisfiable is used instead. The syntactic definition states that a theory is consistent if there is no formula P such that both P and its negation are provable from the axioms of the theory under its associated deductive system.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Consistency
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Model_theory