Learn to read. I have made a comment about cutting parts of an interview as the new method of American journalism. This was not about you, but about Megyn Kelly. One can accept such cuts if a whole question would be cutted completely. But not if the question is there, and the answer is cut.
Your "style correction" distortion was, of course, less despicable than what NBC has done, given that the quoted text contained yet, in a distorted way, the original text. Nonetheless, it is a distortion of the quote, and not indicated (the usual way to mark such modifications is, for example, "emphasis mine" if one emphasizes some part of the quote), thus, a false quote.
Note also that your justification of this manipulation as "style correction" is nonsense, because the modification was clearly and intentionally distorting the meaning. So, naming this "style correction" makes it an intentional lie. If you would be usually a civilized contributor, I would accept this as a sort of joke. Not in this case.