A Poem Thread

<*>Five and Nine <*>

She did.
She did not think she was an ocean sponge,
She like he

would primp and tailor, and value.

Gosh how the two liked to break paisleys in the air,
taking to snare drum
in the house
n' outside,
not to bother the trees, he and she would drum frett out

out that the unknown "care like plus..

"one four" good buddy they'd say, and clip time with their snare drums..

******

then they'd blush

blush

after they valued plus.

*what for evening must arise he and she smiled..

and played warm flute

*not to bother the trees.

He and she were not sponges
or pocket watches in the human ocean,

Only of

It is that as..

without a hitch, dressed in 'affine

Vast affinity

breaking paisley

for 'life to have it's will.
 
Oh, you who read some song that I have sung_,
What know you of the soul from whence it sprung_?

Dost dream the poet ever speaks aloud_
His secret thought unto the listening crowd_?

Go take the murmuring sea-shell from the shore_:
You have its shape, its color and no more_.

It tells not one of those vast mysteries_
That lie beneath the surface of the seas_.

Our songs are shells, cast out by-waves of thought_;
Here, take them at your pleasure; but think not_

You've seen beneath the surface of the waves_,
Where lie our shipwrecks and our coral caves_.

~ Ella Wheeler Wilcox
 
I set out on a mid summer night
The gold that strolled was worth the fight
I hold her hands as she bends her wing
simple as a string and a ring
ample time to hold the pain
suffering released by the rain
ceased to be a burden of dreams
fluttering over the streams which drain
I've held her hand and seen her cry
my heart still has never heard a lie
This mid summer moon will be crescent soon
This mid summer night felt an angels womb
 
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PartyBoy,


I guess your pretty writing didn't need a title. I haven't the skill to * highlight your writing here (I just don't know how to highlight afore writings). I think the writing is a pretty lovesong. I may write it down with credit to PartyBoy 2013. :D

*Anew
 
I've already had that thought:) I'm just not quite sure how to sing it yet or the beat or which voice to use. Lol but thanks for the confirmation of my suspicions.
 
Robittybob1 said:
Its your fault that I write the good stuff. How so? I don't know.

My prayer was answered,
Was this fate or divine,
No Man knows, only Time.
Time will tell if this is true,
With no one to fault,
When the good stuff comes,
I blame you.
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I don't even know what arrogance is.
It's just something that comes naturally to me.

But if you say so, it must be so.

http://sentence.yourdictionary.com/arrogant

Which of the sentence examples below describes my arrogance best?

arrogant sentence examples

arrogant to assume that all witch's etc are in it for the money.

arrogant tosser was rendered ineffective.

You disgust me too, because you are unbelievably arrogant.

Nonetheless, it appears arrogant to have made up your mind before you've read all the evidence.

arrogant to believe that the russians would discover it all.

arrogant swagger as he whips his floppy hair across his brow.

Another added: " just the most unhelpful and incredibly arrogant and rude receptionists that can be found.. .

Given the facts of recent history, claims to the contrary, frankly, seem arrogant.

arrogant enough to think that?

arrogant contempt for our opinion is a national disgrace.

However, i think the print media will remain somewhat arrogant to on-line writers.

Rd: without sounding arrogant, do you expect people to like the book?

arrogant enough to say that we have no need of thee?

arrogant disregard of the majority view.

At this point the rather arrogant manger ordered them off the premises.

For this reason, he became arrogant for he believed that nobody could match him.

arrogant bastards will need a favor.

She is far too arrogant to learn the error of her ways.

Many thought this illness had changed him from a slightly arrogant young man into one who was sympathetic to the plight of others.
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I think this is it: "You disgust me too, because you are unbelievably arrogant." Agh! How silly do you want me to be?
 
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a playful poem song


*Snare Drum Clip

To market To market
*
beta sympathetics
*
**oxytonic***************

..maybe it's ok
n' one sight of Kali was enough not to

****
hey 'ole Shiva bolo
..as if we've reached a finish line ?now
****
pala pala pala

**
h,mm h,h,mm 'hmm

********************

To market To market
********
ehya, 'tis no slot machine

?how will this Write.

****************
 
PartyBoy said:
I set out on a mid summer night
A plight not slight with words she whispered
The gold that strolled was worth the fight
Honorary not monetary the blessings resume
The might of freedom drenched in drink
I hold her hands as she bends her wing
simple as a wool string and a dull ring
words we lent were not religious
worst of which no lake could drown
A frown upon the ponds attest
The best of beasts gain only fishes
A poet gains his holy wishes
ample time to hold the pain
suffering released by the rain
ceased to be a burden of dreams
fluttering over the streams which drain
I've held her hand and seen her cry
Sun shimmers upon a clever disguise
my heart still has never heard a lie
Surmise to say tis my demise
I feel my family will never be swooned
This mid summer moon will be crescent soon
This mid summer night felt an angels womb
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Robittybob1 said:
I don't even know what arrogance is.
It's just something that comes naturally to me.

But if you say so, it must be so.

http://sentence.yourdictionary.com/arrogant

Which of the sentence examples below describes my arrogance best?



I think this is it: "You disgust me too, because you are unbelievably arrogant." Agh! How silly do you want me to be?
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Glad you figured it all out there, bob.
:-}}

Anew said:
a playful poem song


*Snare Drum Clip

To market To market
*
beta sympathetics
*
**oxytonic***************

..maybe it's ok
n' one sight of Kali was enough not to

****
hey 'ole Shiva bolo
..as if we've reached a finish line ?now
****
pala pala pala

**
h,mm h,h,mm 'hmm

********************

To market To market
********
ehya, 'tis no slot machine

?how will this Write.

****************
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That's pretty neat, Anew. :)
 
*Terrestrial History*

O' the sharted glory of war needs a successor,
Centuries of increasing human population

And the birth of international internet

my my O' my
'language differentiality

and processions for political peace midst the principle of Armistice

in the trust of Unity changing

I think of Montessori

I think of hiking a trodden path,
A terrestrial denizen
in the will of good will

O' the sheddings
the journeys

for an equanamous

providorship

in the great successor the arts of making Peace.

:bugeye:

*********<*>**********

:)
 
thanks for the 'hallo Quantum Quack* for I have been inspired here. I like to amble in many of the threads, and I say I have liked your writing as well.
 
Anew said:
thanks for the 'hallo Quantum Quack* for I have been inspired here. I like to amble in many of the threads, and I say I have liked your writing as well.
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hmm but not as uhm "neat" as this line:

"O' the sharted glory of war needs a successor"

which I found to be rather...uhm... neat!

Sometimes a little diamond just comes to the surface,

-Perhaps it is the "mood of the muse" that's to blame,
This single line caught my eye and to pass
-with out acknowledgement would be a ...shame. :)
 
Hugs my song today .... but now all hopes are now dashed .... Oh babe, I hate to go.

Every place I go, I think of you
Every song I sing, I sing for you ....

All my bags are packed
Im ready to go
Im standin here outside your door
I hate to wake you up to say goodbye
But the dawn is breakin
Its early morn
The taxis waitin
Hes blowin his horn
Already Im so lonesome
I could die

So kiss me and smile for me
Tell me that youll wait for me
Hold me like youll never let me go
Cause Im leavin on a jet plane
Dont know when Ill be back again
Oh babe, I hate to go

Theres so many times Ive let you down
So many times Ive played around
but I tell you now, they
dont mean a thing
Every place I go, I think of you
Every song I sing, I sing for you
When I come back, Ill wear
your wedding ring

So kiss me and smile for me
Tell me that youll wait for me
[ Find more Lyrics at www.mp3lyrics.org/bcy ]
Hold me like youll never let me go
Cause Im leavin on a jet plane
Dont know when Ill be back again
Oh babe, I hate to go

Now the time has come to leave you
One more time
Let me kiss you
And close your eyes and
Ill be on my way
Dream about the days to come
When I wont have to leave alone
About the times, That I
wont have to say

Oh, kiss me and smile for me
Tell me that youll wait for me
Hold me like youll never let me go
Cause Im leavin on a jet plane
Dont know when Ill be back again
Oh babe, I hate to go

But, Im leavin on a jet plane
Dont know when Ill be back again
Oh babe, I hate to go

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vesGUA8-Y_k
john denver - leaving on a jet plane (lyrics)
 
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