no i just made it when me n my gurlfirned broke up...shes worthless to me and a whore...and a whore dis-respects their bodies... and the spec resembles the amount of actually love i have for her... and the dirt, well shes dirt to me
A Poem Thread
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Sauce said:
Jack's of course.
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How is he a disgusting person? Considering you don't know the situation, and no matter what, when someone dumps you, your not going to feel happy about it. And he didn't do anything to physically hurt someone, he wrote a poem, to express how he felt and got it off his chest. So could you please remind us how he's a disgusting person
well wen u date a gurl for 2 years then the month yall break up and u find out she gave another guy head and already has had 2 boy friends....u wud be pissed to so please be quite
Everyone is a free person and with full rights to "dump" anyone at any time.Sauce said:
A human being is not a property. And his foul language talking so about another human just shows how primitive he is.
p.s. And of course I wouldn't be pissed. Never have.
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Well, if you've ever had someone dump you, didn't you feel sad? If not, you may not have feelings, and you should probably get that checked. And we have free speech, he's entitled to tell what he thinks about someone, just like your entitled to tell him that you think he's wrong and a disgusting person. Though we all ALSO have the right to free thought, most don't use it, and would rather have free speech.
sneers // This topic has gotten out of hand. Why not a small poem.
One with a scientific theme, this is still Sciforums.
[Permian extinction -2]
a death to me,
a death to you,
a death to everything in sea
and on land, in the skies above.
a death to the human kind,
a death to bisons and butterflies,
a death to fish and trees.
history! it repeats,
95% of life is gone again,
everything, but satellites orbiting the earth,
they remain there as fossils of humankind.
One with a scientific theme, this is still Sciforums.
[Permian extinction -2]
a death to me,
a death to you,
a death to everything in sea
and on land, in the skies above.
a death to the human kind,
a death to bisons and butterflies,
a death to fish and trees.
history! it repeats,
95% of life is gone again,
everything, but satellites orbiting the earth,
they remain there as fossils of humankind.
Life is nothing, but what you make it
You can let it simmer, or you can take it
Create it, into something far beyond the mind's imagination
Far beyond its own creation
Far beyond fact and fiction
Far beyond the cost of tuition
Create it until there is no life itself
Keep going until life is just another book, lying on the shelf
You are waiting, to be known as more then great
But your options are already set upon your plate
Choose one choice, not knowing the greatness you could pocess
Choose another, and be greater then great, at its best
lol, i just made that up right now. Copyrighted 2005 by Sauce
You can let it simmer, or you can take it
Create it, into something far beyond the mind's imagination
Far beyond its own creation
Far beyond fact and fiction
Far beyond the cost of tuition
Create it until there is no life itself
Keep going until life is just another book, lying on the shelf
You are waiting, to be known as more then great
But your options are already set upon your plate
Choose one choice, not knowing the greatness you could pocess
Choose another, and be greater then great, at its best
lol, i just made that up right now. Copyrighted 2005 by Sauce
Here I made something up too. For the company.
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there won't be another night
no, no,
not another -
the knight has been eaten
and the princess is dead,
the dragons laugh blue smoke,
no, no other night.
a new world has been created
from the ashes of the Sun
and the breath of the dragons now free;
it all shines in immortal light,
and nobody will cry again,
not another night.
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there won't be another night
no, no,
not another -
the knight has been eaten
and the princess is dead,
the dragons laugh blue smoke,
no, no other night.
a new world has been created
from the ashes of the Sun
and the breath of the dragons now free;
it all shines in immortal light,
and nobody will cry again,
not another night.
one more. about some mythological female creatures. // just created
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wine and roses
we serve them
on kisses
it is given!
drink! please, taste!
take it in yourselves
don't ask,
don't doubt our reasons to poison
to death!
take them into yourselves
little white flowers
shall be given to your graves
and what little bones
shall be left from the feast
drink! take all the kisses
and all the pain -
your souls yearn for release,
take these flowers, please..
now
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wine and roses
we serve them
on kisses
it is given!
drink! please, taste!
take it in yourselves
don't ask,
don't doubt our reasons to poison
to death!
take them into yourselves
little white flowers
shall be given to your graves
and what little bones
shall be left from the feast
drink! take all the kisses
and all the pain -
your souls yearn for release,
take these flowers, please..
now
and one more, for the new thread tradition of insta-writing
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My little sister Death,
when she comes - everybody runs,
when she sings every body screams,
my little sister, my little sister cries.
Only dolls play in her pale little arms,
only corpses,
only those who had ran,
my little sister Death, she cries -
I lower my eyes.
I hold her hand in my chest,
let her feel my heart, it burns for her,
just for her, my little sister with pale arms:
"don't cry, a brothers' kiss for you,
my sister, my sister, my heart for you."
===========
My little sister Death,
when she comes - everybody runs,
when she sings every body screams,
my little sister, my little sister cries.
Only dolls play in her pale little arms,
only corpses,
only those who had ran,
my little sister Death, she cries -
I lower my eyes.
I hold her hand in my chest,
let her feel my heart, it burns for her,
just for her, my little sister with pale arms:
"don't cry, a brothers' kiss for you,
my sister, my sister, my heart for you."
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i like sauce's wait how come all these poems r expressing life?? haha i like them thoo
wait how come all these poems r expressing life?? haha i like them thoohaha....
she took me by the hand and squinted to see the truth
the love she knew was only to be torn
to be hated afterwards is the chilling thought of misery
not to dread on self pity... but to encourage to move on...
sympathy of ur self means is a lowering motivator
let things go , dont hold back
express your true love, let go of ur silly-teenage loves
if trueness is torn, dont rue..
for only the grey matters will worsen...
Let the love go if its not meant..
AND move on..
once again, no self pity
copyright 2005? i guess? haha .. never copywrited sumthin(pride)
she took me by the hand and squinted to see the truth
the love she knew was only to be torn
to be hated afterwards is the chilling thought of misery
not to dread on self pity... but to encourage to move on...
sympathy of ur self means is a lowering motivator
let things go , dont hold back
express your true love, let go of ur silly-teenage loves
if trueness is torn, dont rue..
for only the grey matters will worsen...
Let the love go if its not meant..
AND move on..
once again, no self pity
copyright 2005? i guess? haha .. never copywrited sumthin(pride)
Go Down Moses
Registered Senior Member
No offense, Jack4War, but yours is some of the worst "poetry" I've ever tried to read.
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*claps*...bravo...I am impressed.
sargant, i was joking around... u think those silly rhymes were serious?? haha no no no my friend. just a fun thing
o wait, i guess those were serious??? nvm i suck then