Ben...er,
lesion, I don't want it to sound threatening, I want it to sound good. It sounds good. Blood dribbled is something unique, something you'd never read anywhere else. Blood drenched is not original, it is in the mainstream, you could find a hundred books with that phrase in it. I want to articulate the blood slowly flowing off of the sword as he moves it through the air, blood drenched, blood dripping off of, whatever, it doesnt work as
perfectly as blood dribbled does. You don't see blood, well, dribbling off of a sword like water does off of an icicle with any other word. I want droplets, small droplets, not giant gushing slabs of liquid flailing off like goo.
He has been fighting for a long time but has paused, giving the blood ample time to stop falling and start dribbling. Frankly I don't give a sh*t if you think it describes dog slobber, part of being a writer is forming sentences that readers can relate to in different ways, so they can see the picture the way you want them to see it. It doesn't work out perfectly with everyone I guess, some people associate different words with different things. Dribble is like water coming off of an icicle or a restrained faucet. Drenched is too much, and drip is a weaker synonym of dribble.
Goofy, you're right. Damn yer good
But lesion, in this case, you can kiss my ass