Originally posted by sparkle
Another point I find lacking is the focus on the psychological side of being homosexual.
The best way that I could answer this is to remind you that it was only a 101 level class, and not a masters thesis. The paper had already ran quite a bit longer than it was strictly supposed to be, and my origional goal was just to hit a few key points and give a general feel for the topic to my instructor, who, coming from a nation which aparently simply does not deal with the topic at all. That doesn't exactly explain every little problem you may have with this paper, and I hate to bring up that I acctualy sat down and wrote most of it very late at night about two days before it was due, but that's another factor