Does my abstract make any better sense now?
Abstract- This paper is to fundamentally break down and formalise science process to its fundamentals.
What kind of 'fundamentals'? If you mean logical fundamentals, philosophers of science have been trying to do that for more than a century. It's a huge subject and almost certainly too large for a single paper. There's already a massive literature on the logic of science and anyone hoping to reshape the whole discipline will need to have a pretty good grasp of what philosophers have already said about it.
I think that you have a lot of studying to do before you even attempt something like this.
As opposed to naive set theories.
That's not a sentence, it's a sentence fragment. I don't understand its relevance.
This is to show, that there is no transcendent meaning
What does 'transcendent meaning' mean? What is supposedly being transcended?
to a discipline other than the literal content created by the practitioner. By using a family of approaches to the presentation of science, to construct a true reality
That suggests that you are also going to be arguing for some kind of constructivist metaphysical idealism that once again is hugely controversal and already has a massive literature.
based on absolute axiom truth.
People have been looking for absolute axioms since the time of the ancient Greeks, without notable success. Are you suggesting that you have discovered such a set? Making that claim plausible is, once again, probably going to require more than a single paper.
And what's more, the word 'axiom' suggests a Euclidean-style deductive scheme. Are you proposing to construct such a scheme? If so, what are you going to deduce from it? The logical 'fundamentals' of science? (Good luck, I don't think that it's possible.) Or even more grandly, 'true reality' itself? (I'm even more doubtful about that.)
A reality that looks at the true values, that humanity has quantified
Another sentence fragment that doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me.
Bottom line: What you seem to be proposing to do (it isn't clear) is more than any other philosopher has done in something like 2,500 years. And what's more, you are proposing to do all of it within the confines of a single paper. My reaction to that is that it isn't credible.
My suggestions:
1. Study some philosophy. Read an introductory philosophy text, then get into the history of philosophy and the philosophy of science. In order to do the philosophy of science well, at a professional level, you will need to understand the science that's under discussion very well. That will probably mean at least an undergraduate level familiarity with it.
2. Hold off on writing your paper until you have a better idea of what the issues are, what the reasoning is, and what others have already written about all of it.
3. When you do write your paper...
focus. Don't try to solve every philosophical problem in a single shot. Identify one issue that you can address in the scope of a paper's length. Then make your point as clearly and as persuasively as you possibly can.
4. Try to be less iconoclastic. Don't start out by telling everyone that you are going to 'crucify' science and prove Einstein wrong. That kind of rhetoric will just make other people think that you are a crank.
5. Think about taking a basic expository writing class.