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The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with three
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with three ridiculously
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with three ridiculously dressed
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with three ridiculously dressed yodelers
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel,
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel, would
 
tim840 said:
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel, would
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There's an error here. "Calibrated" is a transitive verb and its object is missing. I think you have to back out the "would," quietly insert a dash between "calibrated" and "with," add a dash after "dirty brothel," and then come up with the object that was calibrated.

And it's still starting to look like a German sentence.
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated--with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel--
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The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated, with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel, a
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated, with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel, a mentally
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated, with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel, a mentally enraged
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated, with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel, a mentally enraged group
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated, with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel, a mentally enraged group of
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated, with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel, a mentally enraged group of mutated
 
The gigolo that that lady, who recently discombobulated an organized brothel with nothing but some angry chickens who once calibrated, with three ridiculously dressed yodelers in a dirty brothel, a mentally enraged group of mutated lemmings,
 
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